Today in Whenua we had to pick a topic off a website and I chose should a language be an invention the writing is on to be persuasive above is the paragraph that I wrote. The easiest part for me was picking a topic because I knew this one would have heaps of reasons to be an invention. And the most difficult part for me was typing it up onto my blog in 10 minutes. By Harrison
hello Harrison its Tane.
ReplyDeleteI really like your blog post maybe next time
you could put a bit more punctuation.
Thank you.
Hi Harrsion.
ReplyDeleteYour writing persauded me to realize that a launage is an inventon becuase you had a lot of key points. It is good that you said where we got your idea from. Keep up the amazing work!
From Katelyn
Hi Harsion
ReplyDeleteYour writing is great you have persuaded me maybe you could've done a bit more. thanks bye
hi harrsion
ReplyDeletemy name is jari your writing is very cool and you have persauded me that a launage is a inventon because you expland a lot about it so ceap the good work
Good work Harrison I think your work is fantastic.I agree that languages should be considered a invention.Next time maybe you could add a bit more?
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